Over my lifetime I would like to achieve many things. Actually, I am still confused about my future plan. But now I have 2 decisions about my future plan. I have 2 main things and the 2 main things are divided into 2, informal future plan and formal future plan. In this time, we cannot live without money. So formal future plan for search money. I want to work in newspaper office. I want to be a journalist or editor. Then, my informal future plan is I want to be a musician.
I think to be journalist or editor have a unique challenging. It does not make me bored. Every day, I can get update news from local or national area. Unfortunately, my writing skill is not good enough but I want to try and try until I can reach a good skill to support my dream.
In my second plan, I want to be a musician. Maybe, some people say I am just a dreamer but whatever about that. I just want to amuse everyone with my music and I hope everyone likes that. Now, I can play guitar although just an amateur guitarist. But step by step I want to learn guitar more deeply and learn all instruments music especialy guitar classic.
Maybe, that’s all about my future plan. I hope all of my plan can be done. Now, I dont give up to reach that. I must study hard and search an experience. In this time I just want to be journalist or musician but someday maybe its can be change. To be a teacher maybe its more possible if I see from my lecture. What I will to be just God who knows about that. I believe whatever I will to be is the best for me.
I hope all of my plan can be done
BalasHapusit will be better if you wrote "i hope all of my plans can be reached"
but, for the best answer is "asking to mr.chosa" haha
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BalasHapusThat's great idea. I want to tell my experience. I did like playing guitar like you. I ever joined classical guitar course. But, the more I learned, the more I was affraid of making mistakes. So, I decided to stop it..haha..
BalasHapusBut, I don't mean to scare you. If you have strong desire, don't give up easily like me. be presistent and you will be success..^_^
Here, I'll try to correct yours. The words signed by * indicate incorrect grammar, spelling, and diction. The words signed by # indicate my correction. I hope it will really help you. If you are still confused, I will be glad if we can meet and discuss together.
Over my lifetime I would like to achieve many things. Actually, I am still confused about my future plan. But now I have 2 decisions about my future plan. I have 2 main things and the 2 main things are divided into 2, informal future plan and formal future plan. In this time, we cannot live without money. So, formal future plan for *search #(earning) money. I want to work in newspaper office. I want to be a journalist or editor. Then, my informal future plan is I want to be a musician.
I think to be #a journalist or #an editor have a unique challenging. It does not make me bored. Every day, I can *get update news from local or national area. Unfortunately, my writing skill is not good enough but I want to try and try until I can reach a good skill to support my dream.
In my second plan, I want to be a musician. Maybe, some people say I am just a dreamer but whatever about that. I just want to amuse everyone with my music and I hope everyone likes that. Now, I can play guitar although just an amateur guitarist. But step by step I want to learn guitar more deeply and learn all instruments music *especialy *(guitar classic).
Maybe, that’s all about my future plan. I hope all of my plan can be done. Now, I *dont give up to reach that. I must study hard and search an experience. In this time I just want to be journalist or musician but someday maybe its can be change. To be a teacher maybe *its more possible if I see from my *lecture. What I *(will to) be just God who knows about that. I believe whatever I will *(to be) is the best for me.